Content Improvement Protocol

When improving drafts:

1. Remove AI slop first: Em-dashes, authority phrases, false dichotomies
2. Add specificity: Replace "a client" with concrete details
3. Show technical depth: Column names, formulas, actual implementations
4. Trim performance: Delete anything that sounds like "content"
5. Check safety: Pattern vs. person, ecosystem protection
6. Verify voice: Does this sound like the builder you, or the corporate you?